I like 9 the most, the vertical type matches the tower nicely and right away I know it has something to do with France because of the large Eiffel Tower image. Maybe try putting the tagline above the point of the tower or under it.
I like the ones that are in the middle column. I like the colors and the graphic is eye catching. Maybe use the colors of the flag? But I like them. Great job.
wow good job=) those all look really professional. i think i like the top middle one the very best. i like how you made the picture and i like the text black because it stands out.
I like 1,5, and 9 and 1 being my best because sometimes the plainer things are the better it looks especially with the program you are creating it for, but good job for now and try doing some more designs.
These are all great designs but number nine works best. There is a good use of negative space and the hierarchy of elements are well done.
The two red angled shapes at the bottom is rather large. Try bringing it down a bit. Because it's the one part of the image that is almost solid in color and is red, my eyes tend to look there first. The words French Premiere could also be brought down a size or two.
#5 and #9 great work. i do like the monotone look of #5. but ask me thursday i might think otherwise....
very well balanced and i do like the type treatment on most of these. lets talk more in class so I can give you more critical feedback on a bigger format.
I like number 12. The sort of flower design is really effective. The tower ones on the left are repeated and I think someone did very similar design on our first Olympic project. So get avoid of that. The second column from the right looks like best of your work.
I like 9 the most, the vertical type matches the tower nicely and right away I know it has something to do with France because of the large Eiffel Tower image. Maybe try putting the tagline above the point of the tower or under it.
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I like the ones that are in the middle column. I like the colors and the graphic is eye catching. Maybe use the colors of the flag? But I like them. Great job.
ReplyDeletewow good job=) those all look really professional. i think i like the top middle one the very best. i like how you made the picture and i like the text black because it stands out.
ReplyDeleteI like 1,5, and 9 and 1 being my best because sometimes the plainer things are the better it looks especially with the program you are creating it for, but good job for now and try doing some more designs.
ReplyDeleteThese are all great designs but number nine works best. There is a good use of negative space and the hierarchy of elements are well done.
ReplyDeleteThe two red angled shapes at the bottom is rather large. Try bringing it down a bit. Because it's the one part of the image that is almost solid in color and is red, my eyes tend to look there first. The words French Premiere could also be brought down a size or two.
Overall, great variations in comps. =)
Sarom R.
#5 and #9
ReplyDeletegreat work. i do like the monotone look of #5. but ask me thursday i might think otherwise....
very well balanced and i do like the type treatment on most of these. lets talk more in class so I can give you more critical feedback on a bigger format.
I like number 12. The sort of flower design is really effective. The tower ones on the left are repeated and I think someone did very similar design on our first Olympic project. So get avoid of that. The second column from the right looks like best of your work.
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